Team Explosion Comments

JOE'S COMMENTS
Opening needs music and illustration of some sort.
Some sound design necessary
Isn’t there a shot of Jian Mei shooting at Richard. Bad edit.
Cut to Jian Mei during soul searcher part is at a weird time.
Music? Who
Match the fonts beginning and end

STUDENTS' COMMENTS
Too loud
Opening title sequence too long
Credits didn’t match the voices.
ICA explosion at end.
End titles were hard to read.
Sound design - add ambient sound from the street under the voiceovers