Script V.1

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Doesn't sound that bad, I

nwu's picture

Doesn't sound that bad, I think in this it has to be the suddelties that make this good like just making sure the expressions and timing work well and make the audaiance laugh.
-Nick

I think Nick is right on.

jdouillette's picture

I think Nick is right on. The concept is simple; the comedy will be the overacting or the subtleties of the acting performance. I think it is imprtant that the main character get more and more defiant and crazed as the piece goes on. He is consistently incredulous about other's reactions to his intent. Maybe there should be some development to his emotional investment that actually does drive him insane.

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