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hey hey, looking good, did

arochinski's picture

hey hey,
looking good, did you shoot it in HD? it seems like you have a bit of work left to do and i'm excited to see the story unfold. right now the shots seem way too long but i figure that they will be cut up in editing.
see you soon
anna

Jian, You scared the shit out

dwang's picture

Jian,

You scared the shit out of me! It was like the face that pops up in the Exorcist only a lot less scary, but scary enough nonetheless.... A good way to build up even greater suspense may be to slow down the action of the movie. For example, if he walked slower and even leaned on his surroundings while walking and then his gasping face popped up, there'd be more suspense.

David

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