Submitted by arochinski on April 9, 2010 - 3:08pm.
will there be more of a narrative to this? it looks like you shot a bunch of footage and have only edited a little of it. looking forward to the next version... how much shooting do you have left?
anna
Submitted by areinhardt on April 15, 2010 - 6:19pm.
I love the repetitive piano intro and agree with Joe about leaving out the credits. I like that it's just long enough that the viewer goes from "Uh.." to "Ha, this is funny," to "I think I'm uncomfortable" to "Is this the whole film?" to "Oh. Ok, it stopped. Phew, that was weird and hilarious."
If that makes any sense.
I think you should check out the work of Brian Bress.
Here is the link to the video that reminds me a little of you, but there are many others you might enjoy
http://www.brianbress.com/video/over_and_over/over_and_over.mov
I'm not sure what part I was writing this about, but in my notes next to your name it says "MAKE IT HAPPEN! THE VISION!"
So whatever I meant by that, you should do. I think it was in reference to you mentioning that you wanted the piece to go a certain way, but you were settling for something else. Try not settle, try to let your idea come to fruition if you can.
Keep it up. I find your work refreshing, strange, funny, and original.
Anne
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will there be more of a
will there be more of a narrative to this? it looks like you shot a bunch of footage and have only edited a little of it. looking forward to the next version... how much shooting do you have left?
anna
I love the repetitive piano
I love the repetitive piano intro and agree with Joe about leaving out the credits. I like that it's just long enough that the viewer goes from "Uh.." to "Ha, this is funny," to "I think I'm uncomfortable" to "Is this the whole film?" to "Oh. Ok, it stopped. Phew, that was weird and hilarious."
If that makes any sense.
I think you should check out the work of Brian Bress.
Here is the link to the video that reminds me a little of you, but there are many others you might enjoy
http://www.brianbress.com/video/over_and_over/over_and_over.mov
I'm not sure what part I was writing this about, but in my notes next to your name it says "MAKE IT HAPPEN! THE VISION!"
So whatever I meant by that, you should do. I think it was in reference to you mentioning that you wanted the piece to go a certain way, but you were settling for something else. Try not settle, try to let your idea come to fruition if you can.
Keep it up. I find your work refreshing, strange, funny, and original.
Anne
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