Submitted by jdouillette on April 1, 2011 - 5:12pm.
Nice sound. Except for the weird background laughing. Focus on the sound design here. Some poignant background music would help. The head shots seem a little unnatural. Last line might be a bit to literal. But I’m not sure how else you should end it. Shots are a little dark.
Rene: Good dialogue. Seems to flow.
Hugh: Not apparent if it will be a full blown comedy. Need to see more.
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Nice sound. Except for the
Nice sound. Except for the weird background laughing. Focus on the sound design here. Some poignant background music would help. The head shots seem a little unnatural. Last line might be a bit to literal. But I’m not sure how else you should end it. Shots are a little dark.
Rene: Good dialogue. Seems to flow.
Hugh: Not apparent if it will be a full blown comedy. Need to see more.
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