omni-comprehension voice narrative outline

this whole narrative goes with the latest revised script. if it seems out of place i most likely put it as a puzzle in my head. its weird to read without the actual story, so bare with me.

Scene 1:

1.Hold up one second, lets rewind.

2.That’s me, Jeremy. Funny story why I have the bandage on my head, funnier story altogether why I got my ass handed to me

3.thats evan, sometimes I wonder how we even came to meet. The guy himself has a sick twisted view on life Kind of like me. Negativity kind of oozes out of every orifice in his body, he makes for interest conversation

4.thats all that mattered to me then. Looks, popularity, what people saw out of me.

1. I’ve come to hate what I helped manifest. A whiney little prick

scene 2:

1. And it was gone.

7.now that just bothered the living shit out me.

8.the manifesto had begun

9.im pretty sure it was at least Alaska

10.hes right, it was non-sequitary. Weird enough to happen, weirder to even bring up it in the midst of anther topic.

11.one of his favorite pastimes. The amalgamation of many different ingredients,

12.it was god-awful, eating something spoiled, freezer burnt, overcooked, old, and past expiration all in one grilled bite. I personal feel he should be allowed into a kitchen.

1. Far from it.

2. I wish I had a better explanation for this part, but truly this is what bothered me the most.

Scene 3:

1. never a dull moment with this guy.

16.after the fight, I can gladly say everything went to bedlam.

17.the night i went to the restaurant, walking back home the real pain kicked in. I experienced pain all over my skull, which also resulted in migraines all night. Felt like a monster was alive in my head and ready to out. I was right.

1. went to the doctor. thus missing school. He did the whole nine yards on me before actually telling me before I could actually tell him the real reason why I was here.

2. he prescribed me some pills. I never took them, the pain got worse. I never trusted prescription drugs

3. yeah just to sugarcoat it, that’s what happened

21.Takeover maybe. Hostile, not. While it was funny to see Evan thinking for once, it bothered me to see what Evan would even do with a quarter of Eurasia.

1. This is an the acid-tapers dream

2. Res ipsa loquitur

scene 4:
24. From here on out I was on a roll, the thought of doing something and I was able to pull it off

scene 6:

24.that message man is toast

1. and that message was a ticket to oblivion, pure dissolution.

“and here he lies the second character of the tale

This man, the look of him… quiet, mysterious, I couldn’t get around his mind”

26.hell anything was better than first period

1. how could I refuse? I came this far and entered his house.

28.pink elephants on parade

29.and that’s where it hit the fan. Verbatim, on the sheet like an animal report, I was top study.

1. This was all toward his chagrin, funny thing how two lives collide

2. besides the main argument. He made a good point, at first e could have off’d me ages ago

3. He’s right it is his fault.

33.when I woke up this morning I knew I was… well lets just say it kind like this situation. Less dire, but involving ether along with it

34.what could stop me from teleporting

1. a revised essay. Ironic…? Well not really

scene 7:

1. and were back to the motive point. Where “I” was about to meet a fatal end and well…further details are unnecessary.

37.well truly the ironic thing is that there was no winner. For all my power at my disposal I was unable to do anything.bound to a couple pieces of paper. And for all the power Kerr held on his part he was unable to finish the job of truly killing me. Now the world is better off without both of us. But hey what can you say, heads will roll in reverse.