Friendship_DraftV1_Version for critique

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I think you have some really

emishkin's picture

I think you have some really nice moments in here and some great editing! I also like how varied the shots were. You were a good actor, too!
Where do you see this going? What is the plot? I need more info about where you're headed.

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