Fools Bank: The Talk Show Scene; Beginning

This was shot for fun, and it will be on the final video. The video will transition to this scene when one of the main characters introduce it. So, in a way, this scene is like a side order of breadsticks to go with your pizza, and the pizza is the main movie.

Comments

Hey Elwin!
Ok. I like breadsticks as much as the next guy but what I love even more is pizza. Right now I;m a little nervous that I'm not going to get any pizza and I'm going to stay sort of hungry for a while. So all I need to hold me over is you to explain how your main course (a bank robbery scene) will transition into this surreal talk show thing that you showed us in the screening and have also posted on your blog.
Also as far as the bank robbery scene I was wondering how far along you were with that? I only saw the camera leading you downstairs to a bank. I think it's an interesting approach to make the scene more and more strange by having it seem not like a real bank but you are to believe it is. I guess I'm just unsure of where it goes from there. You might want to consider also if you have time to reshoot that part because it was a little difficult to read the signs on account of the lighting and the light handwriting. What if you printed out the signs? or wrote them in marker?
All this guy needs is some more direction and planning. You need to be able to communicate your idea clearly to the audience without having to do much outside explaining. I know you got it in you!
Lenora

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