FILM TREATMENT

Jian Mei,

A good start. We need to hear more details. Tell me more about the attack. Who attacks him and why? What happens? How does he find out he must feast on human flesh. Write it as if you are telling me a story. Add much more detail.

-JoE

REVISED WITH ADDITIONS:

This film is about a typical guy (played by Spencer Cheek) down on his luck who is attacked by a shadowy figure and it tells him what he must do, that is eat human flesh. The shadowy figure attacks him at random, making the situation even worse as he is forced into this. He now lives a double life. A seemingly normal person by day and a monster by night; he is forced to hunt down people. He feels disgusted by what he now has to do and he views it as a horrible curse.

He realizes that if he eats anything else, then he gets cannot digest it and it hurts him. Also, he grows weaker everyday. Staying hungry for a few days with a failed attempt to attack someone at night. He runs back in into the night, lurking through the streets of Boston at night. He grows sicker both physically and mentally. He hates what he now must do. Meanwhile, there are rumors going about town and there is a growing worry in the town. Shown by a conversation with the main character and a friend.

In the end, his hunger gets to him. He kidnaps a baby at night. The longer he contemplates with the baby, the sicker he grows. With the baby, he realizes that he cannot live like this. He leaves the baby behind for the mother to find and collapses. Dying as the camera at night.

REVISED WITH ADDITIONS:

This film is about a typical guy (played by Spencer Cheek) down on his luck who is attacked by a shadowy figure and it tells him what he must do, that is eat human flesh. The shadowy figure attacks him at random, making the situation even worse as he is forced into this. He now lives a double life. A seemingly normal person by day and a monster by night; he is forced to hunt down people. He feels disgusted by what he now has to do and he views it as a horrible curse.

He realizes that if he eats anything else, then he gets cannot digest it and it hurts him. Also, he grows weaker everyday. Staying hungry for a few days with a failed attempt to attack someone at night. He runs back in into the night, lurking through the streets of Boston at night. He grows sicker both physically and mentally. He hates what he now must do. Meanwhile, there are rumors going about town and there is a growing worry in the town. Shown by a conversation with the main character and a friend.

In the end, his hunger gets to him. He kidnaps a baby at night. The longer he contemplates with the baby, the sicker he grows. With the baby, he realizes that he cannot live like this. He leaves the baby behind for the mother to find and collapses. Dying as the camera at night.

Clarify the attack, when you say at random, what do you mean and why does that make the situation worse?
So you need to more fully explain his night adventures, because at first he is searcing at night, but he is not attacking anyone. SO explain the attack on someone that ends with him running away...
Tell me what he eats and what happens.

What are the rumors going around town? Why do they lead to him? Why do the townspeople think that he is the one?

-JoE

This film is about a typical guy (played by Spencer Cheek) down on his luck who is attacked by a shadowy figure. As he is attacked, he is knocked out. The shadowy figure attacks him at random, making the situation even worse as he is forced into this eventhough he hasn't done anything to deserve it. While he is knocked out he has a dream, a voice that tells him he must eat flesh. He wakes up in bed in the morning.

He realizes that if he eats anything else, then he gets cannot digest it and it hurts him. Eating anything else makes him cough up blood. Also, he grows weaker everyday.

Staying hungry for a few days, he has a failed attempt to attack someone at night. He stalks someone and then he gets close and tackles him, pinning him down. But, his conscious goes against it and he runs back in into the night, lurking through the streets of Boston. He now lives a double life. A seemingly normal person by day and a monster by night; he is forced to hunt down people. He feels disgusted by what he now has to do and he views it as a horrible curse. He grows sicker both physically and mentally. He hates what he now must do.

Meanwhile, there are rumors going about town concerning his attack at night. No one knows its him yet, but people are growing worried and a neighborhood watch is being set up. Shown by a conversation with the main character and a friend.

In the end, his hunger gets to him. He kidnaps a baby at night. The longer he contemplates with the baby, the sicker he grows. With the baby, he realizes that he cannot live like this. He leaves the baby behind for the mother to find and collapses. Dying as the camera at night.

A typical guy (played by Spencer Cheek) down on his luck. At night he is randomly attacked by a shadowy figure and is knocked out. While he is knocked out he has a dream; a voice that tells him he must eat flesh to survive. He wakes up in bed the next morning.

He tries to eat breakfast and cannot digest it and it hurts him. Eating anything makes him cough up blood. Not eating he grows weaker everyday. He goes through life normally but keeps having the dream, and hears his friends talk about vampires and reminding him of his situation.

After a few days, he has a attempt to attack someone at night. He stalks someone and then he gets close and tackles him, pinning him down. But, his conscience goes against it and he runs back in into the night, lurking through the streets of Boston. He now lives a double life. A seemingly normal person by day and a monster by night; he is forced to hunt down people but he feels disgusted by what he has to do and he views it as a horrible curse. He grows sicker both physically and mentally.

Having a conversation with his friend, he hears now there are rumors going about town concerning the attack at night. No one knows its him yet, but people are growing worried and a neighborhood watch is being set up.

One night, his hunger gets to him. He kidnaps a baby at night. The longer he contemplates with the baby, the sicker he grows. With the baby, he realizes that he cannot live like this. He leaves the baby behind for the mother to find and collapses, Dying at night on a street, alone.