DIVE
- great music! Do you have permission?
- You did a wonderful job editing! The cuts had a nice rhythm and pace, went well with the music and was seamless.
- I think having close ups was a really good idea.
- Even if it is hard to figure out why she decides to eat the trash off the trash can it doesn’t matter because the ending is sweet so everyone will just accept that part of the story.
- I think it is a wonderfully playful piece and not bad on the eyes too!
- That pan on the end is sweet!
JOE'S COMMENTS
Ending is wonderfully enigmatic.
Colors are nice
A little too much during the park looking for her. Time to make a comment? montage of waste of food.
Maybe a bit more of that.
Check the audio in the crackling
Maybe he runs away more quickly
STUDENTS COMMENTS
Colors are nice.
Like the editing a long with the music.
Crackling noise in the audio
Have music start playing later, maybe, since the music is inquisitive.
Liked the ending especially.
Thought the music worked really well.
Didn’t understand what was happening, that she was following her. Mabe make that more obvious.
Re-shoot the turning around the corner.
The end really worked.
Really liked your use of close-up.
Pan at very end, her walking away.
Comments
DIVE - great music! Do you
DIVE
- great music! Do you have permission?
- You did a wonderful job editing! The cuts had a nice rhythm and pace, went well with the music and was seamless.
- I think having close ups was a really good idea.
- Even if it is hard to figure out why she decides to eat the trash off the trash can it doesn’t matter because the ending is sweet so everyone will just accept that part of the story.
- I think it is a wonderfully playful piece and not bad on the eyes too!
- That pan on the end is sweet!
JOE'S COMMENTS Ending is
JOE'S COMMENTS
Ending is wonderfully enigmatic.
Colors are nice
A little too much during the park looking for her. Time to make a comment? montage of waste of food.
Maybe a bit more of that.
Check the audio in the crackling
Maybe he runs away more quickly
STUDENTS COMMENTS
Colors are nice.
Like the editing a long with the music.
Crackling noise in the audio
Have music start playing later, maybe, since the music is inquisitive.
Liked the ending especially.
Thought the music worked really well.
Didn’t understand what was happening, that she was following her. Mabe make that more obvious.
Re-shoot the turning around the corner.
The end really worked.
Really liked your use of close-up.
Pan at very end, her walking away.
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