Soundwars pre screening

Goals

My goals are to create a better written piece and to spend more time on each phase of the process

Hot Sauce

The hot sauce consumes, the hot sauce controls, the hot sauce knows your fears and you hopes.

Students: 
scheek
Jun 3 2010 (All day)
Class: 
Fast Forward '10

Rough Daft

Please comment

Treatment

Title: Unknown

Film Ideas

First idea, A man wants a small electronic device, but no has the money. He gets the money, buys it and falls in love to a 80's hair band song, then gets home and sees it needs battery but he spent all his money.

Second idea, The sun sets on a lawless baron wasteland. This land is home to a man taking the law into his own hands. This land is one with microphones for guns, who will win in sound wars.

Third idea, William Thorsy, an experimental spaceman trapped on an alien planet. Finding friends in unlikely places, he struggles to escape.

Audio peace

I would like to do a piece on the buffet style restuarant in my grandparents town called the Applehouse. It will be like a southern restaurant scene.

!NT3RV13W

Interview

Students: 
scheek
Date: 
October 23, 2009 (All day)

Team Explosion

Students: 
scheek
Students: 
jguan
May 22 2009 (All day)
Class: 
Fast Forward '09

Magnetism

A giraffe coming to a self realization.

Students: 
scheek
May 21 2009 (All day)
Class: 
Fast Forward '09

Team Explosion Comments

JOE'S COMMENTS
Opening needs music and illustration of some sort.
Some sound design necessary
Isn’t there a shot of Jian Mei shooting at Richard. Bad edit.
Cut to Jian Mei during soul searcher part is at a weird time.
Music? Who
Match the fonts beginning and end

STUDENTS' COMMENTS
Too loud
Opening title sequence too long
Credits didn’t match the voices.
ICA explosion at end.
End titles were hard to read.
Sound design - add ambient sound from the street under the voiceovers

Crit Draft Comments

Magnetism_draft v1

feed back please

Script v1

Students: 
scheek
Date: 
February 13, 2009 (All day)

gallery first impressions

I enjoyed the Fairey exhibition because it really brought me closer to his work. The colors contrasted nicely and I feelas if his art isn't art at all, but a movement on it's self.
Hasta la bye bye!

Goals 08-09

Technicle goals are to use photoshop more efficiently.
My artistic goal is to have more control of the parameters of my shots and to compose more gracefully. So far my only ideas for final projects are two words: magnetic giraffes.
Hasta la bye bye!