Author of the Dying Seven
A man has trouble living his life normally due to seven voices that controlled his life and gave him inspiration, and then left him cold turkey.
*REVISION*treatment- author of the dying ten(working title)
the movie i am filming is a narrative about a miserable poet who lives with seven omnipresent voices in his soul. they have been with the title character since as long as he knew. they control half of his life, choices, actions, and they are the main source of his poetry and writing, the main character's only luxury in life. as time progresses he notices that the voices inside him start to fade away slowly and slowly. he doesn't know how to write or come up with many without them, since they have been there for so long, but the main issue is how will he be able to live his life normally.
i dunno...maybe
well i came up with three ideas over the past two weeks. well three tat i can actually do and write. my plan is to make it better than my last piece.
well my first idea is about a pessimistic poet named James London. he struggles as an illiterate basket-case who plans on writing a poem describing his true emotions.
a story about one kid who get revenge on three teens by feeding them methamphetamine laced cupcakes. as the three teens who eats the cupcakes, they experience the adverse effects of meth and its impact on the body as time progresses.
super-fly vixen
11/6/09
ehhhhhh
i see this as a good chance to talk about anything, put it on the mic, and hopefully not risking everything as well. i see this a a chance to compensate for my other debacles in art pieces on the site. i would like to put it in the third person, so i can possibly even bash myself in a sense. also a and chance to experiment, to dismantle the message all together and not make one. but that is being lazy. maybe for once i can work harder and make something that doesnt sucks.
11/13/09
smoke & mirrors
hot garbage
NAMAC conference
Well in my opinion, the conference seems to shed light on the dark spots I had about media arts and education. At first it when you think about it, the media arts and education programs looks as if a giant powerhouse of CEO’s feeding the masses ran them. When I walked in, a ballroom room filled with filmmakers, bloggers, painters, teachers, I thought to myself “these are my kind of people”. When I think of NAMAC, it’s the same people from the real world who run these kinds of youth based media programs around the country.
Omni- comprehension
The story about a boy who develops supernatural powers which disrupt the life of the boy who’s writing about him.
schedule... xerohour nine AM
my whole schedule in a nutshell
3/5- email bill bruford
3/6- voice narrative
3/7- shooting scenes 1, parts of three
3/8-backup day
3/9- shooting parts of scene 1 in gym
3/10-first official shooting day in effect, parts of 3 and 2
3/11-backup day
3/13-parts of rest of 3, and scene 5, all ??? scenes
3/14-backup day
3/15-3/18- free day to do any shooting or slacking
3/18- scene 4 with joe
3/24-parts of scene 6 and onward
april-TBA
i cant promise everything to be finished within the month being, but things are willing to change.
cast-
jeremy
evan
omni-comprehension voice narrative outline
this whole narrative goes with the latest revised script. if it seems out of place i most likely put it as a puzzle in my head. its weird to read without the actual story, so bare with me.
Scene 1:
1.Hold up one second, lets rewind.
2.That’s me, Jeremy. Funny story why I have the bandage on my head, funnier story altogether why I got my ass handed to me
3.thats evan, sometimes I wonder how we even came to meet. The guy himself has a sick twisted view on life Kind of like me. Negativity kind of oozes out of every orifice in his body, he makes for interest conversation
revised script copy
most swears removed, new lines added and replaced
Scene 1:
jeremy: a lessoned learned. Never challenge a psychopath
Evan: im pretty sure that’s the price to pay for getting your ass handed to you.
Jeremy: “this headache…” He went right for my face.
Jeremy: are the drinks here yet?
Evan: where the our drinks? HEY, YOU!
(the barkeeper walks up)
Barkeeper: sorry guys what did order again?
Jeremy: just 2 darks on the rocks
(barkeeper walks away)
Jeremy: my reputation is at sake now. Its on the internet, im definite
Evan: yeah its on the internet by now
movie script
Omni-comprehension: the contrary tales script
Scene 1:
jeremy: fuuuccccckkkkk!
Evan: im pretty sure that’s the price to pay for getting your ass handed to you. Now you look like a bitch.
Jeremy: “this headache…” FUCK! He went right for my face.
Jeremy: are the drinks here yet?
Evan: where the fuck are our drinks? HEY, YOU!
(the barkeeper walks up)
Barkeeper: sorry guys what did order again?
Jeremy: just 2 darks on the rocks
(barkeeper walks away)
obey: first thought
i loved the Shepard Fairey exhibition. the mix of propaganda ad conspiracy in his work just... opened my eyes truly. i can proudly say this is work that inspires me. he sends a loud message and his art style is original and so brand new. i always see art as something that is just there, not bad but ok i guess. his artwork is the apotheosis of true art in my mind. blowing...mind.....thingy
truly a masterpiece....truly an artist
omni-comprehension-the contrary full movie outline.
scene 1:
he tells the audience to rewind
(flashback)
the main character is at school. he finds himself in a confrontation with a kid he doesnt get along with, the 2 get into a heated argument. the 2 meet in the locker room downstairs, as the 2 are prepared to fight each other. the main character loses the fight due and experiences blunt force trauma the the head and forfeits.
(end flashback).
omni-comprehension-the contrary: movie guideline
this is everything so far. so close to the end, just have to work on it i little later. i still don't know what to name the characters though. the title was hard to think of though
scene 1:
he tells the audience to rewind
(flashback)
the main character is at school. he finds himself in a confrontation with a kid he doesnt get along with, the 2 get into a heated argument. the 2 meet in the locker room downstairs, as the 2 are prepared to fight each other. the main character loses the fight due and experiences blunt force trauma the the head and forfeits.
(end flashback).
a message to tom brokaw
I think the campaign project went really well. there were some things that i wish could be better, but i liked everyone elses project except for me and Jeremy's. i am interested in doing the new spring programs though, the design one and the April vacation class seem pretty cool
well as of now i just thought of another idea for a final piece i could do. the two main problems are with the idea is finding people to work with and who will listen to me, and actually feel ass'd enough to write the script before its to late. i'm gonna try not to make any excuses though.
Jim Jones Kool Aid
im still confused about what i wanna do for my final piece. as well for working in fast forward this year i'm somewhat dumbfounded on using the software for the class, its kinda frustrating. i have alot of idea's for short films that include comedy, SCI-fi, or no meaning whats so ever. which includes
-story about a guy who sees a person that nobody thinks is real, but himself
-tale about a kid who kills himself but comes back to life and discovers that he has a divine ability to comeback to life after death but misuses his power for stupid reasons
-a kid with psychosis
sleepy jean
since i am in the class for the year i just wanna create as many good pieces as possible. i got alot of idea's later this summer that had come to me in a dream, walk, showering , waking up in shock, or just through personal experience. i get alot of my ideas from doing other stuff and through other experiences as well, so a good majority of my work is 20% original (sadly).


